damn
How in the world did you make all those crazy wobbles!? TEACH ME :D please? :D hahah What vsts do you use? cause that was raw.. best happy birthday remix ive heard.. ever.. 5/5 10/10 for sure.. Great job man.. and Happy birthday :D hope its a good one :D
~Jason
Thanks bro! And I use a VSTi called Massive. It's pretty much standard among 13-year-old kids who like to pretend they can make dubstep. :P
So clean.
Everything is so crisp and clean.. I wish i could make my songs this clean :D Im really loving this.. in the final version, you should put a little breakdown section in here and make it like a little piano solo, That would be amazing. Overall.. I have absolutely nothing to say. Its clean, the flow is perfect, everything is great. and i agree with realmguys, Please send me a pm when its done. I would love to hear the final version :D
looking forward to that :)
~Jason
Hehe, thank you so much for your review, Jason! :D I do think your songs are very clean! :p And amazing for that matter. ;) I'll try to do that. I do love piano, so that idea is most welcome! I shall pm you once I finish it. :)
Beautiful :D
remember that bass preset on harmless called like liquid state? or something like that? Sounds like you have that on :P It fits perfectly.. Strong kick comes in.. then.. this.. vocal thing? PLEASE TELL ME HOW TO MAKE THAT OR WHAT PRESET.. I would love to have that in one of my songs :D all of your leads are perfect.. do you use nexus? thats what it sounds like.. if you do.. i would love to know some of the presets you used.. cause they are sexy.. the bass is spot on.. i mean. there is nothing i can say bad about this track.. and the only thing that i can say to help this is maybe put a pad in the parts that are kinda quiet.. just to fill out the song a little more :P haha anyways.. perfect song.. you get my 10 and my 5 hands down..
~Jason
thanks alot dude :D! its actually all nexus :X and i don't remember all the presets, but i have the flp file if u want it, just send me a pm and i can send it your way. i use fl9 btw. :D
Hey Hey :P
This is getting pretty popular man :P haha so since i went over everything with you on msn.. i guess i'll just take the time to go over what past reviewers have said..
First off i gotta say.. It was so crazy how we made this song so quickly :P haha that was great.. soo anyways...
ArgentiaKrystofel - I loved her review :D and you can tell her i said your welcome:)
TIMarbury - I love you.... (no homo, but really, your awesome) and i agree soo much with him.. this could seriously be a 4 min song.. add a couple new leads, and bam, its 4 mins :P hahah maybe later we can go back on this song.. fix up the few things, and then we would have an amazing full song :)
and finally AzureVixen - Yup the piano was in 16th notes.. and next time we come back to this song we will put the tempo down a little :P and yes you are very right by saying the energy just falls out of place, when we come back to it, we will fix that :) and your so right with the crash, it really doesnt fit at 48.. Sir furious, we need to find a better build up crash :P haha and yes as mr furious puts it we will give each section a little more screen time :P
So.. all in all.. there are just a few tiny little problems here.. but those are super easy to fix! i'll probably have time next weekend and we can stay up till like 6 am making this song even better than it is :) hahah It was really fun working with you.. and after 15 votes, its still at a 4.60.. thats amazing :) hahah maybe this will get on the top 30 ;) hahah you never know anyways.. i'll talk to you later man.. peace
~Jason
Oh, cut the chatter... The crash effect was yours, and you know it! :P
I'm not even gonna plan staying up to 6 AM or anything... But, with any luck, we can do that. :)
Yup, you get the shortest response. Hey, I was only on MSN with you while making this... :P
~Sir_Furious
Hmm
so.. a 7min song by mr Darkfire.. lets see how this goes
Starts off amazing.. great intro.. arp sounds delicious but the thing you have to work on the most is.. deffinatly getting off repetition.. people will get really bored of your stuff if you do a pattern for 2 mins then just change to the next pattern for another 2 mins.. and on and on.. see what i mean? you have to add a lot more variety.. in your drums.. and especialy in your melody.. once you get that down.. you would be set with an amazing song.. i really like this song to tell you the truth.. i just thought it was way to repetative and the transitions kinda sucked :/ not to be harsh or anything.. they were just really all of a sudden with out giving us listeners any time to think what just happened.. you know? you must start putting snare rolls before transitions, also.. instead of jumping right into the next melody.. add a melody that transitions the first to the sencond to make it less all of a sudden..
SO basically.. i think you should cut this song to be like a 3-4 min song not a 7 min song.. its just too repetative..
Great sounds.. amazing hi hats.. just improve on the things i told you.. and this song would be amazing :D
great work man
~Jason
I originally planned to do a 4 minute song, but I got too carried away. This is a BETA so Ill still be working on this. Percussion really isn't my forte, but Ill see what I can do. I forgot to add some filters on this song, so it does seem a bit suckish on the transitions. To be honest, I was working on variations on the melody, but I wasn't complete. This is like the basic template of the entire song. Any tips on percussion? I have so much trouble making good percussion patterns. Ten again I only use the step sequencer. Ill work on everything, so be prepared when it comes out.
Beautiful.. simply beautiful
Man, you just keep making better songs every time :D
I love the synth that comes in at :53.. oh man.. this song is just perfect.. i can't find one thing wrong with it.. your an amazing artist.. and i know you'll get even better with every song you produce :)
I still dont think its done yet, please keep working on it and make a good ending :P preferably one that loops really well so us listeners and just leave it on repeat for a whole day :P
By the way.. what synths and vsts do you use? we could collab sometime ;D haha
Anyways.. This song is amazing.. nothing at all thats wrong
10/10
5/5
~Jason
Thanks man! :) I suppose I could get it to loop, i'm too lazy at though :P I use only z3ta+ can't get a hold of nexus and its really expensive :p
And yeah it would be an honor to collab with you :)
thanks for the review! :)
not bad :D
I hear the little guitar sound that sir furious uses in his songs :P I like it.. its a nice touch on this song..
It has a hip-hop type of drums to go with it.. but its like a chinese song from the guitars. its a nice little style.. i like it :D
some things you could've changed.. i think that the synth that comes in at 1:50 is way too loud.. everything was mixed correctly except for that one synth... and again at 2:49.. It would just sound better with a lower volume
But im digging the intro.. i love that little "bloop" echo sound that you use in the intro :D this is a really nice song.. but i think that you used the same type of melody over and over, just different sounds and stuff.. and i think you should've changed that up.. from :32 - the end of the song, it was pretty much the same melody.. that would've made this song a lot better :D
Over all.. Its not bad :D i like it :) but i think you should atleast put Sir furious' name in the discription so people can atleast check him out too :P
anyways good job you two!
~Jason
I love you, nohomo
Dude..
I'm thinking you are going to be added to my list of fav artists.. This is crazy good.. Please finish this man.. it could be a top 30 song for sure! Its amazing.. It harmonizes so well.. where did you learn how to make techno so well? a class? from videos? or just from practice? just wondering :D i love this a lot..
This is really really good.. I love the filter at the beginning on the drums :D .. man.. its just a perfect song.. beautiful
10/10
5/5
fav artist
~Jason
Haha thanks alot man :) You are on mine ;D
I'll try finish it this week :) And I wouldn't go as far as top 30 haha, the top 30 board is a conspiracy!!!! :P
Yeah I work on harmony alot, sometimes I over do it haha. And I wouldn't say I make great techno its just a simple chord structure then working up and down the scales :P and the filtering on the drums is my trade mark haha you will see it in alot of my songs :) Thanks alot for the aesome review <3
Beautiful
Kinda reminds me of xKore :P haha It was nice talking to you today on live chat :P that was pretty cool watching xKore make his songs :D anyways.. on to your song
Intro: Man.. that was sick.. one of the best dubstep intros i've heard.. so crisp.. and the little synth that comes in.. sounds sooo nice.. And the drop.. Ughhh asgfhdagfdfds sorry, i had to wipe my jizz off my keyboard.. such an amzing drop
.. is that Massive? or another vst.. please tell me, i would love to know :D mhmm.. its really nice..
All in all.. its an amazing dubstep song.. im glad to have met you so now i can have another great artist added to my favs list :D
Such an amazing song, Congrats on making it
~Jason
Ayyyy, thanks a ton, man! That really means a lot :) And yesss, once the beat drops that's mostly Massive you're hearing, thanks for asking :D
And definitely dude, live chat was the shit. Can't wait to see xKore do it again! We've definitely gotta keep in touch. PM me and maybe we can collab or something some time ;)
What's up guys? My names Jason, I'm 16 and I love making music :D check out my audio :P
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