hmmmmm...
hahaha its hard to review a house song.. cause.. i dont really listen to it that much XD but i'll try my best..
The fade in at the beggining and fade out at the end make for a great loop :D haha the intro sounds.. good.. (hahah as far as i know xD) but.. really.. I kinda liked that synth at :28 .. i think you couldve kept it in a little longer.. and that you couldve done a little more.. maybe a little faster melody? or an arp with that sound? haha yet again.. its hard since i dont listen to house that much :P but i really do kinda like it.. for some reason the sound of like a low bass guitar keeps screaming in my head "PLEASE PUT ME IN THIS SONG!" lol, I would think that would be perfect.. you know the song sunlight by cornandbeans? the bass part in that song.. would fit pretty well in this song :D im not sure what synths you have and dont have.. but that would be pretty cool..
I think you should just take this song as an experiment into house.. start listening more and more to your favorite house songs and see what they do to make the song good and interesting! and try that out in this song! well.. i hope i helped :/ hahaha i wished i wouldve known more about house before i reviewed this :P sorry about that haha
~Jason