JasonHorecky's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

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wow

Can you please make a clean version of this song? PLEASE :D that static.. ehhhh as starcecil said, it kills the song.. its just.. kinda.. really annoying.. at first i thought my headphones were breaking and i was scared for a sec.. then read the reviews and was happy :P all the backround noises are SO COOL. They fit perfectly... and the piano is perfect.. ughh such an amazing song..
So.. i heard you wanted to change your name right? :P so.. change it to.. "The genious" cause thats what you are :P hahaha so really.. please consider taking out the static thing? and then you have a gold track..
the end.
~Jason

Or4nges responds:

Thanks man :p

Reverb can make any sample/sound sound ambient lol. I'll consider taking it out, but I still kinda like the static.

:p We'll see.

[Happy Birthday To Dubstep]

damn

How in the world did you make all those crazy wobbles!? TEACH ME :D please? :D hahah What vsts do you use? cause that was raw.. best happy birthday remix ive heard.. ever.. 5/5 10/10 for sure.. Great job man.. and Happy birthday :D hope its a good one :D
~Jason

EricFreeman responds:

Thanks bro! And I use a VSTi called Massive. It's pretty much standard among 13-year-old kids who like to pretend they can make dubstep. :P

[Huzzah!]

So clean.

Everything is so crisp and clean.. I wish i could make my songs this clean :D Im really loving this.. in the final version, you should put a little breakdown section in here and make it like a little piano solo, That would be amazing. Overall.. I have absolutely nothing to say. Its clean, the flow is perfect, everything is great. and i agree with realmguys, Please send me a pm when its done. I would love to hear the final version :D
looking forward to that :)
~Jason

AshleyAlyse responds:

Hehe, thank you so much for your review, Jason! :D I do think your songs are very clean! :p And amazing for that matter. ;) I'll try to do that. I do love piano, so that idea is most welcome! I shall pm you once I finish it. :)

[TI:.Freaky Motivation]

Beautiful :D

remember that bass preset on harmless called like liquid state? or something like that? Sounds like you have that on :P It fits perfectly.. Strong kick comes in.. then.. this.. vocal thing? PLEASE TELL ME HOW TO MAKE THAT OR WHAT PRESET.. I would love to have that in one of my songs :D all of your leads are perfect.. do you use nexus? thats what it sounds like.. if you do.. i would love to know some of the presets you used.. cause they are sexy.. the bass is spot on.. i mean. there is nothing i can say bad about this track.. and the only thing that i can say to help this is maybe put a pad in the parts that are kinda quiet.. just to fill out the song a little more :P haha anyways.. perfect song.. you get my 10 and my 5 hands down..
~Jason

TIMarbury responds:

thanks alot dude :D! its actually all nexus :X and i don't remember all the presets, but i have the flp file if u want it, just send me a pm and i can send it your way. i use fl9 btw. :D

[Musing Inferno (COLLAB)]

Hey Hey :P

This is getting pretty popular man :P haha so since i went over everything with you on msn.. i guess i'll just take the time to go over what past reviewers have said..
First off i gotta say.. It was so crazy how we made this song so quickly :P haha that was great.. soo anyways...
ArgentiaKrystofel - I loved her review :D and you can tell her i said your welcome:)

TIMarbury - I love you.... (no homo, but really, your awesome) and i agree soo much with him.. this could seriously be a 4 min song.. add a couple new leads, and bam, its 4 mins :P hahah maybe later we can go back on this song.. fix up the few things, and then we would have an amazing full song :)

and finally AzureVixen - Yup the piano was in 16th notes.. and next time we come back to this song we will put the tempo down a little :P and yes you are very right by saying the energy just falls out of place, when we come back to it, we will fix that :) and your so right with the crash, it really doesnt fit at 48.. Sir furious, we need to find a better build up crash :P haha and yes as mr furious puts it we will give each section a little more screen time :P

So.. all in all.. there are just a few tiny little problems here.. but those are super easy to fix! i'll probably have time next weekend and we can stay up till like 6 am making this song even better than it is :) hahah It was really fun working with you.. and after 15 votes, its still at a 4.60.. thats amazing :) hahah maybe this will get on the top 30 ;) hahah you never know anyways.. i'll talk to you later man.. peace
~Jason

SirFurious responds:

Oh, cut the chatter... The crash effect was yours, and you know it! :P

I'm not even gonna plan staying up to 6 AM or anything... But, with any luck, we can do that. :)

Yup, you get the shortest response. Hey, I was only on MSN with you while making this... :P

~Sir_Furious

[Triumph v2]

Not bad man

i first have to say.. you have to atleast credit basshunter in this.. cause people think that its actually your song when its not.. yes you made it and changed some notes, but really atleast make the name basshunter remix or atleast put that in the title.. or else you'll be getting a ton more 0's and 1's from people.. im just watching your back.. im not hating you or taking off points for that.. okay? just letting you know.

on to the song..

ehh.. the bass gets really annoying from the start :/ .. it sounds like a sound that a frog would make when i squeeze it as hard as possible :/ not a great sound that your bass should have.. but i mean if thats the only bass you have.. eh.. find another one.. trust me.. look for a dance bass.. or go on youtube and type in how to make a good bass in fl studio or whatever DAW you use...

Second.. you should look into LP filters and such.. or more or less regular filters in general.. they help alot and make your sounds sound even more professional.. use them whenever you introduce something that the listener hasnt heard before.. it helps

Third.. a huge thing.. YOU NEED TO LOOK UP HOW TO MASTER PROPERLY.. i put that in caps cause its probably the most important thing any producer must know.. it makes your sounds go from good to amazing.. plesae look up how to use parametric eq 2 theres your ticket to making good sounding music

Fourth.. kinda repetative.. you should add in more sounds.. the kick shouldnt be 4 kicks for the whole song.. change that.. put in snare rolls on transitions.. low pass filter the snare rolls to make them sound good.. add a breakdown so the listener can take a little break.. all of these things should be in your song.. more repetative it is the more a listener hates the song.. its the hard truth..

fifth... gotta work on your ending.. dont just "end it" right there.. no one likes that.. you have to contruct your ending.. maybe with filter cut off and such idk.. people do it differently.. just listen to the best songs out there. they all have amazing endings.. orrr they make the song loop which is a plus if its an amazing song..

all in all.. gotta work on a lot of things.. but seeing that you look kinda new at making music.. not bad.. not bad..

and just to let you know.. i keep my reviews constructive.. im not trying to be mean.. just trying to help
7/10
3/5
~Jason

[-:.Rainy Night.:-]

Raw

Bro.. this song is sooo raw..
I want to make this type of Drum and Bass SO badly.. i can't even tell you :( This is like my dream to make a song like this.. i would do anything to learn.. could you define liquid dnb? cause im thinking that im in love with liquid..
but for real.. this song is amazing.. not one thing i can pull out of it that is bad.. drums are beast.. Ah... i cant get enough.
10/10
5/5
amazing
~Jason

garlagan responds:

Wow man, thanks a lot for this review : D
I'm glad that you liked it.
Oh liquid dnb it's a subgenre of dnb. Its based on relaxing melodies and pads and all that kind of stuff. It's meant mostly to be listened. And yeah, it's amazing XD
Thanks again for the feedback Jason. I appreciate it a lot.

[/-Resolution-\]

Hmm

so.. a 7min song by mr Darkfire.. lets see how this goes
Starts off amazing.. great intro.. arp sounds delicious but the thing you have to work on the most is.. deffinatly getting off repetition.. people will get really bored of your stuff if you do a pattern for 2 mins then just change to the next pattern for another 2 mins.. and on and on.. see what i mean? you have to add a lot more variety.. in your drums.. and especialy in your melody.. once you get that down.. you would be set with an amazing song.. i really like this song to tell you the truth.. i just thought it was way to repetative and the transitions kinda sucked :/ not to be harsh or anything.. they were just really all of a sudden with out giving us listeners any time to think what just happened.. you know? you must start putting snare rolls before transitions, also.. instead of jumping right into the next melody.. add a melody that transitions the first to the sencond to make it less all of a sudden..

SO basically.. i think you should cut this song to be like a 3-4 min song not a 7 min song.. its just too repetative..

Great sounds.. amazing hi hats.. just improve on the things i told you.. and this song would be amazing :D

great work man
~Jason

Darkfire96 responds:

I originally planned to do a 4 minute song, but I got too carried away. This is a BETA so Ill still be working on this. Percussion really isn't my forte, but Ill see what I can do. I forgot to add some filters on this song, so it does seem a bit suckish on the transitions. To be honest, I was working on variations on the melody, but I wasn't complete. This is like the basic template of the entire song. Any tips on percussion? I have so much trouble making good percussion patterns. Ten again I only use the step sequencer. Ill work on everything, so be prepared when it comes out.

[{The Worst Remix Ever}]

haha not bad :P

So.. basically.. im just saying this but.. this blows my first song way out of the water xD my first song was like a 10 second loop :P
so.. first off.. Volume levels were really really high for the strings at the beginning then the synth comes in and its a lot less quiet.. but.. i'll talk to you about that.. its really easy to fix :P and makes your song sound a lot better just from mixing the song :P

okay.. second thing.. i felt that the melody was a little.. rushed? i might say.. but i mean.. its a remix so.. i mean anything goes for that :P but it still sounded kinda weird cause everyone knows the tempo to the happy birthday song :P the right tempo is like the strings at the beginning :P but.. it sounds more normal everytime i hear it.. so.. its actually not bad :D

third thing.. your kick... is.. um.. how do i say this.. um.. terrible? xD hahahah i can barely hear it.. but i mean.. everyones first couple songs always have bad drums.. not to hate or anything.. i will gladly give you good drum kits and such.. so.. im just telling you this so people wont hate on your good songs when just your kick isnt the best.. you know? Cause a lot of people do that :P

fourth.. Um quick little thing.. but you should put reverse cymbols infront of your regular cymbals.. it makes it sound a lot better :) also.. to tell you the truth.. the "hehehahahaha" voice clip.. doesnt fit in this song at all.. sorry man.. im just honestly telling you that.. It was really loud compared to the whole song and just all of a sudden pops up.. i had the same problem for a long time.. i just wanted to put vocals in my song but i didnt know what sounded good or not.. anddd.. (another reoccuring theme on newgrounds) People hated on a good song just cause 1 thing was wrong.. but hey.. critisism can help a lot sometimes :) other than that.. your synth sounded great..

OH another thing.. you need a bass and a pad.. sooo basically.. it was kinda hollow.. but no worries.. bass and a pad can fix that easily.. so basically.. you put kicks (that are 2 blocks long) 2 block away from eachother.. right? sooo with a bass.. you just fill in those holes with a bassline! i'll help you out more on msn when we get the chance.. and a pad is just the bassline.. but longer and usually is like a violin type of sound.. so.. yeah.. pretty much an amazing first song i'll have to say :P kinda short.. but thats all good :D hope to see more submissions from you :)
~Jason

[xKore - Fire]

Beautiful

Its sick.. Drumstep is the way to go man :P hahaha i also cant wait to hear the final version.. butttt, where is that voice splicing dnb that everyone was in love with? i thought you were going to finish that :P anyways. perfection as TIMarbury puts it.. is exactly how this song is..

also im digging the Howie scream the DjBjra gave you :P fits well in this song :D
great work.. as always :)
~Jason